Song writing thread

This is the place to post the songs that you've written

Song:Right Now
By:Patrick

Days Go By When I Forget About You,
I sometimes deny what i do,
Days slide by and i hate myself,
i sometimes try to hurt myself

i cant stop thinking about you,baby now now
i try and stop the emotions coming back
but i cant stop them right now,
it hurts too bad
it hurts too bad
right right right'
now now

yeah yeah yeah yeah(right now now)
yeah yeah yeah yeah(right now now,)

I slept at 1am thinking of the next day(right now now)
i always dreaded waking up to a bad place
where the world was a disgrace
where the world was a DIGRACE
i cant help the feeling of feeling sorrowww
of feeling sorrow
of feeling sorrow
of feeling SORROWWWWW

yeah yeah yeah yeah(right now now)
oooo ooo
yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah(right now now)

i cant stop thinking about you,baby now now
i try and stop the emotions coming back
but i cant stop them right now,
it hurts too bad
it hurts too baaaaaaaaaa-ddddddddd
right right right'
now now

oo yeah
right right right now now
mmmm
right right right now now

stop thinking of me
stop thinking of world peace
stop thinking of love
move on with your life
there's no turning back
we will always be here
for bad and for worse
when you do someting wrong will FIX IT.

im moving on im moving on(right now now)
im moving im moving on im moving on im moving onnnnnnnn(right now nowwwwwwwww)

i just wrote that then!!its probably crap right??lol

Wow! not bad. Here's one of mine.

Midnight Dance

Da da daddda da da dda da
Baby you've
Held me back
Now all I want
Is to start
Singing and Dancing
Now i'm running away
From you

da da dda da
When the clock
Strikes at midnight
We'regonna leave you
And we're gonna start
A graveyard dance

Chorus:
A midnight dance
There is no time
For haunting tonight
Cause we're gonna
Dance the night away
And have a great night
With out youuu
At this midnight dance

Only hours till
The sun comes up
And we've only
Just started
This party

So let's rock
This graveyard
We're gonna have
So much fun
Without you

da da dda da
When the clock
Strikes at midnight
We'regonna leave you
And we're gonna start
A graveyard dance

Chorus: x2
A midnight dance
There is no time
For haunting tonight
Cause we're gonna
Dance the night away
And have a great night
With out youuu
At this midnight dance

We've made it this far
And this is our dancefloor
We're Gonna show you
What we can do
And dance away
We never knew
How being free
Could be so fun
So we're gonna
Run away from you
And start a grave yard dance

Chorus: x2
A midnight dance
There is no time
For haunting tonight
Cause we're gonna
Dance the night away
And have a great night
With out youuu
At this midnight dance

hope you like

Cate

Great Jay.J Sounds very upbeat

Yeah I don't have a melody to it.

2 new songs.

Guardian Angel-
Have you ever felt like
There was nothing else
In life for you to do
But to protect
The ones you love
Have you ever felt like
That their life
Was more important
Than yours is

Chorus:
I just can’t sleep
Knowing that
You’re all by their self
I’m your guardian
Your guardian angel
I’ll watch over you
Even when I’m gone

They try to keep
Away from each other
Your thoughts
They evade mine
But it doesn’t matter
Because it helps me
To keep you safe
And i’d do anything
Just to make you happy

Chorus:
I just can’t sleep
Knowing that
You’re all by their self
I’m your guardian
Your guardian angel
I’ll watch over you
Even when I’m gone

I’ll fight for you
To keep you alive
And risk all that I have
Just to be there for you

Chorus:
I just can’t sleep
Knowing that
You’re all by their self
I’m your guardian
Your guardian angel
I’ll watch over you
Even when I’m gone
I’m your guardian angel
I’ll fight for you
To keep you safe
Because
I’m your guardian angel



Untitled:

Ooh ooh oh

Every step I
Take forward
I seem to
Be pushed back
Right to the start
I’m trying to
Conquer this dream

Chorus:
I feel so at home
When I take
To the dance floor
I’m going to make
This dream real
And take on the world
And make a new classic
And I’m gonna own
That floor

This isn’t no practice
I worked so hard
To get here
Just to show you
That it wasn’t
Just a dream
You made me
Who I am today

Chorus:
I feel so at home
When I take
To the dance floor
I’m going to make
This dream real
And take on the world
And make a new classic
And I’m gonna own
That floor

I’m gonna share
This one dance with you
This was my dream
And now I’m living
My life like I’ve
Always dreamt of

Chorus:
I feel so at home
When I take
To the dance floor
I’m going to make
This dream real
And take on the world
And make a new classic
And I’m gonna own
That floor

I’m gonna own
This dance floor

That song guardian angel was the easiest. the second one was hard because i was listening to another song that was distracting me

how do you come up with this stuff? i like it

It's not that hard once you start. Generally you 4-8 lines for a verse or 2 then you make a chorus up that doesn't really go for too long cause youwant it to be catchy then you do another verse or 2 then you put a chorus in the maybe a finishing line.

Sounds like logic but I suck at trying it.

Logic is something you don't use too often

At least I try

I think that your songs are beautiful Jay.J. Please post more!!!!!

Thanks Alli

Well here is a new one called Sorry

I can take away all yor pain
I can make you happy again
I can show you the world
I can be there for you
To wipe away your tears
When you need me the most

(pre chorus)
I'm so sorry that i couldn't help you
I'm so sorry for all the mistakes i've made
But nobodies perfect
Sorry I couldn't be your superhero

(chorus)
I couldn't save you
And i'm sorry
I couldn't be your angel
And i'm sorry
I couldn't take away your pain
Now I feel like i've failed you
And sorry is all I can say

I know that you fight
For the peace in your head
I know that everyday you cry
The tears never dry up
I know that you hide away
From the world you live in
I know you want to tell all
And let it all out
Just whisper it out loud
I'm always listening
Just say all thats hurting
Because i'm always listening

(pre chorus)
I'm so sorry that i couldn't help you
I'm so sorry for all the mistakes i've made
But nobodies perfect
Sorry I couldn't be your superhero

(chorus)
I couldn't save you
And i'm sorry
I couldn't be your angel
And i'm sorry
I couldn't take away your pain
Now I feel like i've failed you
And sorry is all I can say

I know you never wanted me
To see you like this
I'll never leave your side
I'll always be there for you
No matter what happens

Because death has taken me
But i'm still here for you
Even tough i'm gone